Middle

Screeching howl at a crumbling pie
The key lime bluebird
defleckting spotty accusations
Haven't ya heard, haven't ya heard?

Misty naughts blind 
neither nautilidae, neither night nor the day
Spiral enveloper built its niche
upon good and evil and nothing
Haven ya hear, haven ya hear!

Fluffy cliches prowl the grasslands
Coyotes on peyote, arrived one stop too far
These are not the sheep you are looking for
Elusive elysian fields, where are they found?
Heaven, you herd...
Heaven, you herd...

Land, Sea, or Sky, 
in the end:
You die,
you die,
you die.

Reviews

[Maria]

I loved the Heaven you herd, part, man I was so seeing that in my mind... truly enjoyed reading this, and well done

[emmajoy]

',,, not the sheep you are looking for
Elusive elysian fields, where are they found?
Heaven, you herd...'

This really is a true play on words, on sound, on how to open parenthesis and let it join in! Reading a second time i realise the cleverness and fun.. wit.. running start to finish. You must have a vereee interesting mind!

[duff]

Man, this is awesome. Not only did you step out of the box you grabbed it and dropped kicked it. Poetry with so many avenues and possibility. Great job!

[Winslow Des Totes]

Wow! This is so insanely interesting I do not even know where to begin! For now I will save it in my read file to gravitate to from time to time because there is something so oddly satisfying about the format and diction that I can't quite put my finger on but I am suddenly craving more! Great and most bewilderingly splendid write!!!1

[Cameron Berry]

I'm glad that you liked it! I really enjoyed, for lack of a better word, composing this piece. I'm glad you like some of my writing, it really means a lot. As I said, I will get to more work of yours!

[Winslow Des Totes]

I'm not worried about that I just like finding fun new pieces to enjoy and to inspire me! So keep writing and keep me posted! I'll be sure to check them out :)

[wordman]

nice fun write,haen`t ya heard ?

[Cameron Berry]

Ha, thank you very much wordman, I appreciate it. I'm glad you liked it.

[wordman]

my pleasure !