I won't take less than you

Trickling thoughts from memory to mind

Losing all the silence that I find

Wishing that the sounds of you and me

were all I heard

Feeling somehow dragged down too deep

Wonder if this is something I can keep

What if I lost this hope by morning,

and cursed the light of day?

It's far too easy being down

Love, you make me want to climb

It's far too easy being down

I will not stand for giving up

What if I fell into the same routine

Would you still see traces of me?

What if this slipped from my hands,

would you remind me?

It's far too easy being safe

Love, you make me want to risk

It's far too easy being safe

I will not stand for comfort when we could have this

Reviews

[Otsana]

This is a nice poem about taking the big risk of falling in love.
It has a nice flow to it and my favourite part of the poem is the fourth stanza because I think it is something everyone fears when they are in a relationship. Great job!