On to you!

I wrote this a few months ago. It was a reply to someone who decided to insult me in a rap battle.

Lets get to the problem in hand,
I wouldnt have dissed ya but its on demand,
Speakin of these people cos you think you can,
Nothing but a fairy in a wonderland,
Mc stoner f****t your a loner,
Change ya name to spitfire and still nobody knows ya,
F**k around with me G ive already told ya,
Physically or verbally I will always own ya,
Im so cold ill give you pneumonia,
At least then it will get rid of ya boner,
That you have for me and these other mcs,
Your unwanted like a damn disease,
I cant believe, that you put me,
Into the same track as blazey, 
But I bet he, will be so happy,
Cos hes always wanted to be in a track with Mr Mcleavy,

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[Red Brick Keshner]

That'll teach 'em to mess wivya!