Sting

Sting

A Poem by Broken Soul

The talon of your love dug deep
Into the depths of my broken heart
It filled an everlasting empty place
And now that you are gone
I cannot extract what remains
For I would surely fall apart

© 2024 Broken Soul


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this depicts a broken heart better than most poems i have ever read about it...
i feel the sting, deep within.
j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A feeling we are all familiar with--if you've experienced heartache, that is. Thanks for sharing. Hope things are upward for you. Time heals all wounds that reason cannot.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 18, 2019
Last Updated on September 8, 2024

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Broken Soul
Broken Soul

Edmond, OK



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