Swoon

Drawn in by an in imperceptible force
A magnetic pull that lacks a description
An Intense connection with no vision
Letting it take complete and total control
Binding the lost ends of opposite souls

Reviews

[billyjf]

Reading was a bit confused with the lack of punctuation. I like the half rhymes, especially between "control" and "souls." "Swoon[ed]" reminds me of how I felt in one of my high school poems.

[Chris Shaw]

That magnetic pull can really have strength in it. I can relate to this little write. Nicely penned. Thank you so much for leaving that lovely comment on my wall, it was most appreciated and I thank you.

Chris