It Could Only Wait

I guess the overall feeling meant to be shown is depression.

Tattered and worn was the soul

That fluttered in the wind

Insanity ate at an unwhole heart

That unwillingly beat within

Blank was the unwanted face

Where a grin was never spread

Happiness a rare occassion

Where smiles always soon met death

Seemingly meaningless was the life

That was dragged on nonetheless

Its flame to go on withered

As it was thrown many tests

Burnt out was the flame

That would never be reignited

For death the life waited

As it and happiness would never be reunited

Reviews

[Traci]

Those who understand depression will truly connect with and appreciate the honesty, and raw emotion portrayed in this piece. You have done a wonderful job, Soul....I look forward to reading more.

[Clown Princess of Crime]

wow...thats all i have to say is wow....good wow but dang dude way to go this is amazing, how long did it take to write this?