arrows and darts

aRRoWs aNd daRtS
 
cHaOS induced....once dormant....eros, he spears us - smears our tears like.... ash and the indifference of wind ...   obsidian flows.... flames into frozen    ..... what is always becomes what was then... lessons in time and space..      < hiding what they can't replace  >   ...   sliding down the archaic chasms ...  the lines on me you trace  ...wearing regret.. ... in a half-smile on your face..  tracks from my eyes to my palm - my ring of solomon so long gone... battle sites scarred in stars..  mount of venus   ..reduced to a crater...  a void  ...now, just two short years later...still drowning, i confess  < despite my escaping out west >  ...drifted    into   immensity...  there only iO breathed.. .so patiently, i waited...i waded... never sated ...or sedated ...  until purple and blue invaded ..... gasping and grasping for air. . . silently screaming .. hands covering deaf eyes... this time, ophelia swims through the lies.. ......breaking the surface of my refusal to awaken ...  i was only avoiding .. the absolute intensity of admitting.... "...i must have been mistaken....."                                     
 

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[ABitBrokenPoetry]

o wow. i absolutely love this. so deep, thought-provoking, brilliant. i can relate to this, being lost, realizing your 'mistaken', o how i can relate. i love the way it is written as well, amazing imagery, emotions. this is going in my favorites. a brilliant piece.