Not Today!!! Not This Way!!!

i dont no the genre and dont realy care i just neede to say this i hope she reads it

She moved in to my life bring light and warmth

Then tor her way out again like a hurricane leaving nothing but pan

And yet I would give anything just to have her back again

But now things have changed and this pain drives me insane this is no game

She is my finial rain there will be no drops to kiss away the pain or hide my shame

I am crying for all to see like the boy how just lost the final game

But oh no not today I am not going to cave this will be my day

She will love me once again !!!!

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[RAOrourke]

not a bad poem, just two grammar errors I saw...
"leave nothing but pan"...pain
"like the boy how." ...who

could feel emotion coming through your poem