forbidden love

 

For ever Finding a wall

ofstone Ever lasting  

Resistance Ever standing

blockades Love left

idling and I wishing

dayand Night for

Defences GOING away

ever Standing

never ending love.

Reviews

[FJ]

I love the way you worked this poem. The wall is an obstacle for us all at one time or another. You took a subject familiar to most and exposed it with a few words.

[just Penny]

I like the word play here. Those walls can be hard to break down, but worth it if the right thing comes along. I enjoyed reading your poem :)

[Aimee]

Wow.

I really like this poem.
It looks simple, but yet it speaks a strong message.

And I love how it spells "Forbidden Feelings" in blue. [:
I'd never think of that.