Accident

just what i though i would Wright this when recovering from 2 weeks on life support and 4 weeks in Intensive care unit arfter a accident on my bike so i was thinking about what i love and feeling the pain of my accident so please enjoy the poem and review

 

A mistake leaving

Calling your phone  

Cold shoulder replying

I need a second chance

Daily begging for forgiveness

Echoing cry of pain linger through my mined

Not ending but growing louder each and every day

The truth it’s my entire fault that our relationship has ended

Author's Note

pleas review it i need some thing to do

Reviews

[BLACKCRUSH]

Its a little short and does not appear to be finished yet, I do like the concept and that the writer has truly accepted blame for what pain they have caused.Its not bad overall : )