Lone star

Lone star

A Poem by Carissa Marie

I trudge along the path, 
With no one to keep me company.
I look up to check if it's still there -
That lone star that never leaves. 
How many nights did I look up the skies, 
To find that one that always stay. 
I spent so many nights -
Staring, 
Wishing, 
For some miracle to happen;
For that one to come alive.
How many lovers have I lost,
How many times have I broke my heart. 
And yet that lone star stays the same,
Unlike the ones I used to hold.
 I yearn for years to touch it, 
To live within its warmth. 
 To thaw away the coldness deep within me, 
And to be with my beloved star.
But I know dreams are meant to be dreamt, 
Just like how stars are meant to be adored, 
And so I trudge along the path, 
Content with knowing I am not alone.
 

© 2015 Carissa Marie


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Reading this poem I can't help but think that the "lone star" is actually a metaphor for something else it has a much deeper meaning then what is presented to us in the poem, a very good poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


Carissa Marie

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
This is very different, but in a good way.
This was beautiful, sounded so poetic.
Full of emotion, meaning, soul, and depth.
Keep writing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Carissa Marie

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading. :)
cimmy wuv xxxooo

9 Years Ago

Anytime :)

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Carissa Marie
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21. Female. AB Journalism. Philippines. :) Introvert. Weird. Over-thinker. Music lover. Bookworm. Frustrated Artist. Writing is my therapy. "Let my words be your own form of immortality" .. more..

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