Intoxicated

ALCOHOL!!

Warmth radiates down my body

 As you flow through my skin, 

Making my heart pound and my head sway. 

Just a little taste of your love - 

Cheeks flushed,

And I'm intoxicated. 

Your venom's so deadly, 

So poisonous; 

Enticing me to want more. 

The thrill of having you, 

Of taking you in, 

Of feeling you inside.

Oh it shakes me! 

Tearing me to pieces,

Until I can have my fill, 

And be whole again. 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I know this feeling. Some places make us free and wild. Nice place to know if we are in control.
"The thrill of having you,
Of taking you in,
Of feeling you inside.
Oh it shakes me! "
Above lines are true. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Carissa Marie]

Thank you for your kind words sir. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[W R Stowe]

This can be construed at two different angles and except for the tag you pretty much leave it open to or imagination.nicely done

[Carissa Marie]

Thank you. I was gonna leave it as it is but i might be misunderstood. And im too young for that. :)

[Jamestown]

If you're going to get drunk, love drunk is the way to go, nice work!

[Carissa Marie]

Thank you. :)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

awesome poem enjoyed reading it........
keep writing :)

[Carissa Marie]

Glad you enjoyed. Thank you. :)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

my pleasure :)