Pieces of you

It felt good to see you again

And to have held those hands I once held. 

The one that sent shivers down my body, 

As you trace every curve and lines of my silhouette. 

Your touch lingers on my skin, 

 Still feeling fresh, a year after you left.

It felt nice to have seen your smile, 

With those two big front teeth 

That shouts imperfection, but is perfect. 

I still taste the last kiss that you gave. 

It should have felt sweet and warm, 

But instead it was bitter and cold. 

I felt happy to have heard your voice again. 

That rough and low tone that only you can make -

Singing those songs that you used to sing. 

I still hear your laugh, 

An echo from a place from long ago -

Way before our laughs turned to silence.

It felt magical to have stared into your eyes.

Your eyes still has that glint, 

That look that shows how vulnerable you really are. 

It felt familiar. 

I felt complete. 

Transporting me back to when -

My eyes are your eyes, 

My hands are your hands, 

My ears are your ears, 

My mouth is your mouth, 

And I am yours.

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This was extremely romantic and just beautiful.
It was so meaningful and deep.
The whole piece sounded so poetic.

This was my favorite line:
It felt nice to have seen your smile,
With those two big front teeth
That shouts imperfection, but is perfect.
(I have front teeth like that to, my boyfriend thinks there perfect)

This really was brilliant, I loved it :)

[Carissa Marie]

Thank you so much for reading. I'm so touched. :) I'm really glad that you liked it

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Any time Carissa :)

[Jamestown]

This is a very sweet write, I can feel the happiness shinning through.
I pray that this happiness will always be what it is now, thanks for sharing.

[Carissa Marie]

Thank you for the kind words and for reading. :)