Point of view

You smiled your carefree smile, 

The one that reaches your eyes.

A long time had passed, 

Since that smile I saw last.

How happy you looked, 

As you laugh silently.

You reach out to fix a lock of hair,

A special gesture, 

That would've melted my heart.

Your eyes full of love,

As mine were full of longing. 

I almost forgot that look, 

That look that says, 

'Everything's gonna be okay'.

With a subtle reluctance,

You took a step forward

Leaning for a kiss.

You gazed down and smiled into her eyes, 

But I had already gone my way.

Reviews

[Chaos_Collector]

The title of this poem definitely fit this poem well. Telling what you see in first person perspective. I enjoyed the read Carissa :)

[Carissa Marie]

Thank you for reading. :)

[Chaos_Collector]

You're welcome :)

[ChemicalMadness]

interesting glimpse into what you've seen here....really well done scene....

CM.

[Carissa Marie]

Thank you. :)