Illusion of a perfect life

I'll close my eyes and spread my arms

My face absorbing the sun

As if I was up and flying

Feeling the wind beneath

As I imagine the beauty that is surrounding me. 

I'll bask in this feeling

Until I could feel no more,

Until I could feel my body no more. 

I'll stay in my serene fantasy

Even if for only a few seconds.

I'd live within this feeling

Til I feel my heart coming to an end.

Only then could I leave this place,

So full of hopeless faces,

So full of broken promises,

So full of foolish dreams,

With an illusion of a realistic fantasy.

With an illusion of a perfect life.

Reviews

[Pax]

sinong bang hindi!!! ~ i feel you kabayan... your young but you have felt this feelings already... You know what i didn't feel this when i was still in college... but when i turn a functional man of the society... i have felt the hopeless of the endless barricade of life's challenges... and i still felt it now... but you what my dear kabayan... i never did lost the little light of my heart... never giving up... but time to time i go with my fantasy... this unreal world in my dreams and in mind... i take comfort to them for i believed it makes me wanting to still dream the impossible dream(kanta na hehe)... because you know we all have our reason to do live this insane world we live in... but behind that life is still beautiful...

Hoping you'll find your perfect, even thought nothing is perfect in this world... but in our eyes it is, diba...
great work...
100~

[Carissa Marie]

Thank you po. :) Siguro kaya rin ako nasa field ng Journalism. To make a change in my own way. :)