Lucid dreaming

Lucid dreaming

A Story by Carissa Marie
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My out of the body experience this morning. Really creepy.

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I was paralyzed.
I tried to move
But I couldn't find my body.
I tried to scream,
Begging for help
But my voice seems to be lost.
I wanted to open my eyes
But it seems stuck.
Like someone filled it with glue.
My spirit's awake
But my body's asleep.
I felt my soul being sucked away.
Away from my body.
Still lying down,
I finally opened my eyes
And saw myself sitting up. 
Staring at me,
With eyes as blank as death.
And suddenly,
IT started to
Smile.

© 2013 Carissa Marie


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Pax
wow... kinda gives me the shivers, specially the ending... "bangungot"(di ako sure sa spelling lol)... i feel this when i am emotional drain and tired before i got to bed.. then the bad dreams will just eat you up... its consuming as it's frightening... when that happens i pray deeply... after praying deeply it somehow settles my body so i can breath again... through my life-time it happened 3 times already...


Posted 11 Years Ago


Carissa Marie

11 Years Ago

thanks for the review kuya. Sobrang nakakatakot po. As in. Nung nakagalaw na ko, ayoko na matulog. =.. read more
Pax

11 Years Ago

ganun talaga.... when that happens try thinking of other things... happy things... para di mo mapana.. read more
a wonderful dream well expressed and written nice work

Posted 11 Years Ago


Carissa Marie

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the review. but it was really creepy and scary. Haha.

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Carissa Marie
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21. Female. AB Journalism. Philippines. :) Introvert. Weird. Over-thinker. Music lover. Bookworm. Frustrated Artist. Writing is my therapy. "Let my words be your own form of immortality" .. more..

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