four corners

Trapped in this four corners

Barred from the life of freedom

This barren box of prison

Takes away my youth.

It sucks the soul 

Away from my being

Leaving me with nothing

But a body filled with air.

I lie awake

Staring at the nothingness

Forever trapped 

In this unforgiving solitude.

And so I watch 

As my life fades away

Unchanging

Forever trapped 

In this four corners

Of despair.

Reviews

[The Bored Rose]

Ang ganda *U* nakakarelate >_> ayos lang po ba kung gawin kong prologue itong poem mo ?? Please ? */*

[Carissa Marie]

Sure. Hahaha. Prologue saan?

[The Bored Rose]

Eh kasi gumagawa ako ng series x) hehe, ndi ko pa sya nipo-post pero dito ko sya balak i-post xD hoho, bagay kasi yung poem mo sa heroine na naiicp ko :D

[Carissa Marie]

Haha. Sige go lang. =))

[The Bored Rose]

Salamaaaat~ ! *O*

[Carissa Marie]

Sureness. ;)

[Rhianne Ney]

Four corners called room (:
Such a great insight (:

[Carissa Marie]

Thanks. :)

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome (:

[AYVID N]

This is very sad ghostwriter. I can feel your despair. Sense your pain. You conveyed your sorrow at a wasted youth very well. Thanks you for the lovely poem.

[Carissa Marie]

Thanks so much Divya! :)