Who am I?

Who am I?

A Poem by Carissa Marie

Who am I?
I am a mystery waiting to unfold.
A story waiting to be heard. 
A shadow that looms in the darkest corners
Of the most wretched place on earth.
Who am I?
I am just a wandering soul
Trying to fit in this world unknown.
Living still but all alone. 
Without nothing to call my own.
Who am I?
I am a sad reminder of lost hopes and dreams.
Of disappointments and regrets. 
A living example of what could have been
but have not. 

Who am I, you ask?
I am nothing. 

© 2013 Carissa Marie


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Pax
this is something i see myself sometimes... i see myself as nothing... but i always look at the brightside of nothing... make use of it to survive everyday and learn each day... for i am human, we are human... we keep on striving to become what we wanted to be... wonderful work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Carissa Marie

11 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
A very good question in this poem. We will play many parts in a life. We must decide to be kind or raise cane? You are not nothing. One voice can change the world. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Carissa Marie

11 Years Ago

I believe that we all ask this question secretly in our daily life.
Thanks for reviewing! :)
i can relate almost. i love the rhyming in it

Posted 11 Years Ago


Carissa Marie

11 Years Ago

Thank you. I know everyone has these thoughts somewhere deep inside. :)
This is sad :( But I know that alot of people can relate to this...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Carissa Marie

11 Years Ago

Thanks. :)

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Carissa Marie
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21. Female. AB Journalism. Philippines. :) Introvert. Weird. Over-thinker. Music lover. Bookworm. Frustrated Artist. Writing is my therapy. "Let my words be your own form of immortality" .. more..

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