Wish

I wished on a star

On a cold lonely night

Hoping though you're far

You could reach me tonight

I prayed with my heart

Silently waiting for you

I know we're apart

But still I love you

I dreamt of your face

Wishing you were here

Heard your voice full of grace

It made me come to tears

I wished on a star

On a cold lonely night

Hoping though you're far

You could reach me tonight

Reviews

[escapingherself]

I love this! It's rythmic and lovely and feels very intimate. :) The rhymes feel very natural and flow nicely.

[Carissa Marie]

Oh thank you. I'm glad you liked it even though it's one of the poems I made when I was younger. :)