CH 25

CH 25

A Chapter by CalebSchadeck

“Malcom?” The computer sat silent, Cindy could not get a response out of him “What about Jacob, is he ok?”

            The computer still sat silent “Dam it answer me!” The computer did not answer “Phone”

            The computer screen disappeared and a key pad appeared projected on the desk, she dialed Jacob’s number, a faint ring came from an office in the back room, Cindy walked toward the ringing.

As she walked down the hall the ringing got louder, then it stopped ring as she reached the office labeled Interview Room Cindy opened the door, Mr. Yao stood their holding Jacob’s cell phone.

“Hello, old friend I have been expecting you”

 

“David?”

“Your the on who revived me.”

“I haven't seen you since, since”

“Yes, the accident I know.”

“My company they are the ones who ordered you to be revived that didn’t have anything to do with the accident.”

“I died of my own account Cindy”

“How did you die David”

Mr. Yao began to chuckle "My dear girl, don't you realize? Your fiancé, Jacob killed me.” 



© 2011 CalebSchadeck


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wow, i love the way you keep twisting the story with every chapter! it makes for great reading, and very intense.
my only advise would be to make sure you go through and edit each chapter, because there are quite a few grammer and spelling errors, but the plot is fabulous!

Great job :)

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Carson City , NV



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I have loved writing all my life... not much else to say, just want to share my work. I am also a major Whovian ever since about three monts ago, I love that show! more..

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