To me your as good as dead

What happens to people who crossover to the other side?

Away from the pain, away from life, away from all Earthly attachments 

But when they do move on do they leave a piece of them behind 

A piece that is still attached to Earth

Reminding people that they are still there 

But that piece, that piece will fade and die with the rest

The Earth-ridden people will move on with their lives

For to them you are as good as dead

and wherever you  go when you crossover your piece that you left behind returns

and you know they have moved on 

You have died

and now your as good as dead    

Author's Note

dark yes, but i think there is a certain calming feeling to this poem idk i'll leave it up to you guys!

Reviews

[Sunflower 20]

from the title, i thought this would be a somewhat angry piece, but i was pleasantly surprised. and i think your right, it does have strange calming feeling. nice job :)

[Lily Mae]

The memory of someone is all that's left behind.. in the hearts of those you held that life as special or unique...but sooner or later we all fade from memory...x