the door

The door opened and she walked in, it was a cold for a summer morning the air was crisp and dark clouds threatened to rain later on that evening. The hospital felt warm even though it was only a little warmer then the outside air. The hospital sat atop a hill looking over the sleepy town that was just waking up. Her phone vibrated on her pocket she picked it up and pressed the talk button a voice came from the other end.

                “Ready” Were the only words she heard as she stepped into the front desk area. The ancient computer hummed to life as it booted up. Growing impatient she hit the mouse on the desk waiting for the computer to load. When it finally loaded she went to the patient record. She found the person she was looking for. Smith, Bob it showed that he had passed away last night for unknown causes and was in what the nurses called the freezer. She quickly typed in the 50 digit passcode she had memorized by heart. A separate screen appeared on the computer, just a single button that read “Come back.” She pressed the button and in the freezer Bob Smith began breathing again.

Author's Note

ignore grammer errors

Reviews

[Sunflower 20]

You have wonderful description which brings about great imagery in my head. i think you could add more to this story, it seems like this is only the beginning to me. But either way, nice job. :)