Still wind

booya!

The wind blows and cars drive by; yet I stand still.

My will has run its course; I have no fight left.

I keep a sarcastic smile on my face.

My eyes see and perceive that I can’t comprehend the world outside the world within me.

My beautiful sadness sings the song of my pitiful strength, which puts the sarcastic smile on my face.

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always good to look at the world through a sarcastic smile..nice work

[J.A.N]

I love the line "my eyes see and percevice that I can't comprehend the world outside,the world within my eyes." - its amazing.

I think this could easily be written into a short story as well.
Reading these lines makes me wonder why there is a lost will to no longer fight.