I Have

I need you or someone like you 

To get me through this pain

Because lately the panic and confusion's 

Been pounding on me like the rain

And I hear all the people talking 

Saying I've gone insane 

And maybe I have 

Oh darling, I have 

I feel as though I've reached my limit 

They've left me here on the ground 

It's like my head is caving in, I scream 

But there's just nobody around 

And I'm left here with my thoughts

And I think I let you down

And maybe I have 

Oh darling, I have 

But promise me, when the smoke settles 

And my vision starts to clear 

That you'll return to me, my love

And that you'll never disappear 

Or maybe I should just give up 

'Cause we'll never have near

What we used to have

What we used to have 

Reviews

[Indra's Child]

Wow- this is absolutely amazing. I mean, I never normally find words so naturally flowing in lyrics, poetry or verse like this. I kind of sang this almost out loud.
Boop boooop
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[Wolfwind]

This is a very well woven piece of poetry. Very grown up in it's word choices and style and flow. It easily conveys the emotions and hope and memories, in a clear and concise way, not sappily or overly flamboyantly like many teenage pieces about love are. I applaud you on a nicely crafted piece of poetry!

Great Ink!
Aaron - Wolfwind

[Coyote Poetry]

Very good movement of words and thoughts. I wish I could use rhyming in poetry. Allow the reader to fall into the words easier. I like the desire to find someone to create peace and happiness in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote