If My Words Had Power....

I wonder

if my

words have

power.

Would a

breath from

my lips

be enough to

Make the Sun

rise after

it had

set?

You will

miss the

great star.

you'll whisper

"Stay"

as the light

goes out

forever.

Reviews

[Wandering Minstrel]

so mystical is this piece...It flows sublimely and beautifully

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hmm ..

This poem hangs there - from the window sill, and the sun does not appear to be setting at all... Well done!