Worth Not Dying For

Just 

A sigh

As your

Body

Falls against

Mine.

Just one

Little

Smile

As you 

Sleepily

Return

My words

Of love.

Just arms

Fitting

Perfectly

Around

My neck.

Just

An

Unsolicited

Kiss

So rare

It touches

Me strangely.

Just you

Putting aside

The times

I've done

You wrong.

Just me

Knowing

There will

Be no

Dying

Tonight.

Reviews

[Wandering Minstrel]

your words are beautiful .............

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow, "there will be no dying tonight"

the unsolicited kiss is a nice touch to this...

the acceptance brought forth in this piece.

and again, that off beat beat...with the short lines that gives great pace...

jacob

[Caitlin Lea]

Thanks for your positive feedback!

[yashsickle]

Almost felt like a stopmotion video. The end was very powerful for me. This piece brought up a lot of memories of past relationships. Great job! I hope my awful reviewing skills did not offend you haha.

[Caitlin Lea]

Ha! I am not offended at all! Thanks for commenting. The comparison to stop motion is very intriguing. I'm glad you enjoyed it!