Lies

Not really sure where this one came from but i wrote it in May.

Viscious lies are being spread.  This deadly substance is tearing people apart.  The lies are coming from their disgusting mouth and bringing them to their knees.  In hopes of one day becoming a monsterous creature devouring the last breath that boils within their soul.

Author's Note

It sounds like I'm really mean!

Reviews

[ShanZ-Turn]

wow, very powerful. lots of emotion.. I would say, if you can you should build on this, you could do allot with it. your hitting on such a great subject.

[Stephanie Marie<3]

This is wicked deep. It's so powerful. When I read it I was like wowww this girl is nuts! LOL! Love youu.