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I have no friends that i completely can trust.

i think when im older i should become an actess,

because every day i wear a mask portraying a happy girl

and no one notices that pain thats behind that mask not even my family

i i have tried so hard to make them notice but every hint i make they ignore,

i cn feel the depression seeping deeper and deeper into my brain,

i scream and shout for them to notice me but they wont listen.

i must leave i cant stay hear anymore,

the pain and the suffering is getting all too much too bear

and i know that when im gone they will finally hear me. 

 

Reviews

[Whiskurz]

A sad but well written piece.......Whisk

[Btwixer]

oh wow, i totally love this, i can relate to this so much.

[The White Wolf]

I can completely relate to this. It is hard to know who to trust, especially when we come from a place where we felt so deprived. This was very real and honest and much appreciated. I personally have never much liked masks though. I would rather see eyes crying real tears then eyes forcing a smile.

[Distant horizons]

Excellent. Sometimes silence can be the loudest thing someone can hear.

[Clare Martin]

That's really good. :P