different

story/peom doesnt ryhme short

i sit on my bed crying,

i cant help put think h ow pathetic my life is,

as a young girl i should be full of life and joy

and that is the impression i give put the words

"its hard to see the pain behind the mask" is correct"

i have nothing i can show to my parents from my short life.

While people in school bring home A's and B's

i bring home C's and D's

i feel as if im a dissapiontment to them.

while people in school have achievements already i have known zero

Da ling dan(chinese term)

im in deprssion and i know it

i can feel the evil claws that are trying to pull me into the firey pits of hell

why cant i be like other kids in my school

i dont like being diffrent.

and as i take my last breath i. pray to god that my parents will forgive me

Author's Note

i geuss the moral of this story is that you shouldnt compare yourself to others its good to be diffrent, diffrent is unique and if your suffering from depression tell someone your problems even your dog or cat!

Reviews

[R.A. Youngblood]

It's kind a deep and dark, but is still like it! This is an interesting piece but it's abliet with few grammatic errors..
It's simple and short, it's not rhyming(nevermind)..
You expressed frustration here too.
Thanks for sharing..Keep it up! :D

[Adalynn]

Good write. You can feel the pain.

Adalynn

[Ms.Bri]

..Very dark and full of pain. besides the grammar being a little messed up it's very good. keep writing

[Christina Woods]

Really good did she kill herself in the end or did i misunderstand the last line?!? Very good write!!!