angels cry.

its like a peom/story it deosnt ryhme

Every night i hear shouting and screaming

I cry to drown out their vioces

My friends think i have it all

what would they know, I can not trust them with the pain i carry

and even though they are my friends I know they wouldnt understand

Not alot of people can understand the way my mind works

Every night I cry and dream of escaping by own private hell

sometimes i even think that they angels can hear my cries

i feel lost i dont know what to do i'm running out of time now.

i dont have long left

sometimes i am in so much pain i honestly think that i can hear the angels cries because in a way the pain is being inflicted on them.

But I know that in the end MY angel will keep me safe from evils door and protet me from harms way.

 

Author's Note

sorry for any spelling mistakes towards the end of this because there is this huge black thing stretching across my screen

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem with a sad story. A lot of people had hard home life and few will know their pain. I like the way you told the story in the poem. The poem had a feel of realness. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Kim's Poems]

Wow this is quite amazing,
I enjoyed this.
Keep writing always.

[rosemary keogh]

Amazing write.

[Ms.Bri]

..Very good poem. The emotions you have in this poem are very much felt by just the words. I loved the line "I can not trust them with the pain I carry" I have felt that way plenty of times so I relate. Keep writing ;)

[Distant horizons]

Excellent write again Caitlin. I wish you and your angel well.