beautiful mind

it like a story/peom its short and doesnt ryhme

I walk along the moonlit path breathing in my soroundings.

I love the scent of the flowers as I travel along.

As I stroll along a lovely peaceful lake catches my eye.

I sit down on a rock and shiver on this cold winter night.

people pass by rushing home looking at me as if i am crazy for being out here in the cold

but this is the one place where i truly feel safe. I remember when i was younger me and my twin sister would come down here on a summers day.

But my sister Elena has been gone for half a century now.

it was here where i scattered her ashes when i was only fifteen years old.

Even though my sister was gone from her first life Iknew she was not truly, truly gone

she lives in this meadow danicing around the lake and climbing the vast green trees laughing and giigling.

she is the soft breeze you feel when its boiling hot, she is the gust of wind carrying your trouble away she is the angel that stays here to protect its innocence. This i know is true in my heart and mind. I come hear every night to visit my my sister and her beautiful mind she made this meadow excpescially for me so i can visit her in my dreams. 

Author's Note

I'm sorry for any spelling mistakes, the plot of this peom is that this women has created a special place where she can visit her sister it only exists in her mind.

Reviews

[M.E.Lyle]

Truly a beautiful story type poem. There's something hauntingly eerie about it.
I like it.

[Clare Martin]

thats beautiful caitlin. its a beautiful way of looking at it.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful story. Your powerful description took me to the meadow and I like the way you described the sister. You gave hope and positive feel to the excellent story.
Coyote

[Distant horizons]

beautiful write.

[CHRIS ANDES]

great writing!!!