Sex and Sweat

"He told me he fucked a lot of girls in his time."

You reeked of sex and sweat

and I said you were breaking me

like pills break people

and you laughed.

Your bed had tasted like so many

naked girls that I could hear the

mattress cry.

I would rather get rugburn or,

bruised ribs on countertops than

think about the skin of other sad

little girls wrapped around your

finger.

You reeked of bad choice and I

said, you broke me and you said,

not yet.

Reviews

[Rees Thomas]

f*****g brilliant. excuse my french. yeah guys are arse holes but i always think if a woman gives me her body, its like she's giving me her soul. That s**t turns me on I suppose. But i understand people live in this certain kind of denial plus lust is controlling, and if the fuckings good and tainted with a certain amount of guilt its better at the point in time ahh what the hell, ignore my ramblings

[caisrusso]

Enjoyed your ramblings very much. Thank you for the review, it was much appreciated and I loved it.

[HavenMarie]

Nice poem and very true most guys are users. :)

[caisrusso]

Thank you.

[Lucile Des]

I love this; the end is perfect.

[caisrusso]

Thank you!

[Relic's Bare Trees]

Many woman are used by their boyfriends. I used to see it all the time. It takes strength to walk away, I hope you find it. Good poem.

[caisrusso]

Thank you.