demands

 There is a monster in me

A greedy, hungry burning little thief who takes

and grabs and wants to hold so much in her hands…

she demands and cries at all hours of the night until

someone listens and she is relentless…

always first to fight, last to loose, she

wants you to give over everything

 

until you are no longer you.

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

I`m taking a chance, reviewing another of your
writing. I did one and never heard from you again.

Here goes.
Your poem means that you like the person you are
thinking about . It is natural to want to possess the
one you desire. So, good work.

Cute little story-poem, it should lead in to more of
your work, so I`m off to explore.

------ Eagle Cruagh

[brittneymarie]

amazing write :]
I loved the title

It goes along with every line that you have written

Great job