break up

break up

A Poem by Not Afraid of Bruises

 Answer me.

Damn it I asked you a question and now

You are just going to sit there and

Not answer me?

 

 

You were the one who cheated!

You were the one who lied

 

And you were the one who made all those promises to me

At night when we relaxed side by side and now

That you are the one facing the questions

 

You have nothing to say?

 

Why did I ever trust someone like you

In the first place?

© 2008 Not Afraid of Bruises


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Well said. Relating big-time.
Good job with the subtle rhymes and internal rhyme.
Not a lot to say, but yeah. Good work. Has impact.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow very quickly this poem drws you in and very just BANG!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Not Afraid of Bruises

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