September Coming

We could get passionate about something, hell,
we could make history at this moment.
Bending and breaking all the rules that define august,
we could make something happen if we pretended
september wasn't tomorrow.

And I don't wanna leave you,
feel like I am abandoning something
too great.

And I don't want to linger here to long,
because I might just let you take...

everything.

We could be passionate about something,
if we pretended, if it wasn't september tomorrow,
we could

Author's Note

just be nice and brutal :)

Reviews

[angelina neves]

Lovely! I specially like this:
"And I don't wanna leave you,
feel like I am abandoning something
too great.

And I don't want to linger here to long,
because I might just let you take...

everything."
- as most of the time we want to stay and go, to do and not to do... and at each moment of our lives we could be two so each one would go a different way! (But i suppose that if we could be 2 we would want to be 4 or 8 or 100!)

[Helena]

I can't finding anything to be brutal about here!
Beautiful poem! Thank you for submitting this
to the contest!

Helena :)