Things Never Said

Things Never Said

A Poem by Not Afraid of Bruises
"

serious thoughts over a silly inside joke that my friend and I share

"

"That's what she said..."

 

that's what he said

who said

you said-

 

I didn't say that

 

and someone pull the plug

this conversation is drowning me,

Little Miss 'Innocent'

 

with words and images and useless banter

that is doing nothing to save the people

out there

or even the people

in here,

 

all it does is break promises and drive

those on the outside insane while

those on the inside are laughing so hard,

 

they never see the train coming...

© 2008 Not Afraid of Bruises


Author's Note

Not Afraid of Bruises
be brutal - it's healthy :)

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I giggled, honestly! I loved it! The only thing I would chage is to remove the "and" from "and someone pull the plug". Great piece. : )



Posted 16 Years Ago


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