Latin IV

Note that the image for this is totally random...Wrote this as part of a creative writing assignment - hope the images came out well.

 

 

The room tastes of chalk and coffee in mugs, quickly

hidden under desks whenever a teacher wanders by the door.

 

Lost in here, desks gather haphazard into groups

and students procrastinate and divide paragraphs for work

they will never complete.

 

Buried in piles covered by voices,

Green Eggs and Ham in Latin blares out silently as the

Blackboard becomes a wall meant for

Learning, artwork and creativity.

 

One set of evil eyes with a grinning mouth

And good-natured smile encourages the work, the chatter

As eleven students linger in their words, drag out the moments

until work will half to begin again.

 

Once a student now the wall fly observes the world it left behind

When times were hard and ease came at a graded price.   

Author's Note

just the general stuff

Reviews

[Ahmad Alhour]

In general frame... nice...
And a little note from a friend, try to improve it... specially from the grammar-side...
But it's still nice... it makes the reader to recall some memories of past sensory experience that he had before...

Good Job... hope to see it revised...

[Princess_ck84]

Need some grammar work of course, but other than that, I love the imagery and references you make in this peice!! You have a lot of things in play and I like how all the differences between them all still work together...
I'd love to see this further developed and improved upon! Keep up the really great work with this one!!