Acting Problem

just something I 'pounded' out ... anger/fustration seems to be one of my big emotions right now, and I tend to write off emotion.

my problem?

 

okay, let's review

let's outline the reasons for

emotion to sweep through because,

God, I apparently need a reason

to be angry with you

 

 

and excuse to avoid

ingore and to pretend that

you do not matter anymore. 

 

my probelm? 

Well, I think that would be obvious if

you had eyes,

ears or a sense of tact

but you don't because

you never noticed

the reason to keeping up the act...

Author's Note

The basics - be brutal because being nice doesn't help me at all. :) Thanks for reading

Reviews

[Kara Emily Krantz]

liked the rant feel of it. and the flow was really nice.

could use some tightening up, of course. like you going through and making sure you're saying wht you meant to say. sometimes the syntax seems a little off.

"because,

God, I apparently need a reason

to be angry with you"

taht was my favorite part.