Different Similarities

If you've read any of my other pieces - you might see a pattern with wind... I like wind :) sorry, can't be helped.

You think

that I can't control it.

You believe that I

will fail and fall away, peeled back by

everyone and what

they think

what

they say.

 

You say I don't listen, pay attention or

care about the details that

seem to ache into your skin...

 

But I am different, the air to your earth,

the fickle mind to your solid logic,

but-

     there is a fracture in me.

 

Because I want what you say

I need to be, and I become  air, humid and weighed

instead of a free wind.

Author's Note

you know the drill - but be honest. You don't need to inflate my ego - it won't help me in anyway, and I promise I won't bite you back - I'll only try to explain if you are confused - if you just don't like a poem - tell me. :) Thanks for reading

Reviews

[Alex J. Griffin]

hmm... i think you have some spacing issues... look towards the "I" s and be sure to use spacing to get the feel of the lyrics... maybe you did, idk.