Hidden Wind

just poured this out in seconds, hope you feel it.

I've never been very fast.

 

Wind runs with me, in me

gripping and ripping at my hair,

nonexistant nails

seek purchace on

any asurface and I

cannot breathe in this violence.

 

Do you know me?

Can you pick out the pieces that seem to

be floating, mingling inthis

darkness...

 

Seeking to be forgottenand

screaming to be found I am trapped between the

emotion of control and

the utter desire to be found. 

Author's Note

flow, images and all the basics - be brutal.

Reviews

[Ruby Moon]

this has been said in your previous reviews....
but i like your last stanza too
maybe its because its that sentence i can relate to the most

[Ahmad Alhour]

I love it...
Deep, Emotional and Meaningful...
I don't want to critique, but... this poem made me recall some memories of mine...
It's somehow dark or at least painful with some tastes of darkness...
Lost in the utter pain...
Waiting for any hand, it could be death's one, to take you from your murky solitude...


Great Writing...
Keep it up, my friend...

[forfila]

I love the last lines =)
We all like to feel in control of our lives, but then there is a part of us that has to let that notion go, as our hearts are in a greater search for what is unknown. It is our "the utter desire to be found."

Very clever, true and well worded, I like, I like it a lot..

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