Tell me

a woman who fears a broken heart.

Tell Me….

 

Tell me, is it true,

Do you really love me?

Cause if it is,

I don’t know what I’ll do.

 

Say it again, the words,

I, love, you,

But just say it to me in a soft tune.

 

Tell me, just tell me

What those words mean!!!

I don’t know what it means to you,

But I know what it means to me.

 

I hope you’re not lying,

Or else you’ll be dieing.

Dieing of the pain,

The pain that you made rain.

Tell me, just tell me

Every things alright

And I’ll tell, I’ll just tell you that

I LOVE YOU TOO <3 <3

 

By: C.T

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

I like the honesty that is crying out in your poem. You do not want to be played! Bravo, for you! Your grammar is not nearly as good as your poetry though. One needs the other for strength! Work on your grammar!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the directness and the honest tone of the poem. We need words of love and proof also. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the very good ending. Love is tender and need words and concern. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote