I've never found fear to be easy. My fight or flight response is set on fight, thanks to a few experiences I've had. That being said, you painted a clear image here, with masterful language and an easy flow.
There are alot of poems on Writer's Cafe. If I bother to read an entire poem and comment, it's because it held my attention, which means it must be REALLY good. Thank you for the enjoyable few minutes it took to read and ponder this piece.
Your poem is rather intruiging. You're talking about fear, and what it wroughts in people, and yet the style and language in which you choose to start the work doesn't give the poem a foreboding sense of what it's about. For a second, I thought your first lines were from a classic rock and roll song by Linda Ronstadt.
"and death! crisp and guileless" stopped me in my tracks. I have missed that acidic undertone. What ever the circumstance to see you back, I am glad that you are.
I've never found fear to be easy. My fight or flight response is set on fight, thanks to a few experiences I've had. That being said, you painted a clear image here, with masterful language and an easy flow.
There are alot of poems on Writer's Cafe. If I bother to read an entire poem and comment, it's because it held my attention, which means it must be REALLY good. Thank you for the enjoyable few minutes it took to read and ponder this piece.
I am neither fish, fowl, nor good red herring (from ASK THE DUST by John Fante.) I'm the author of writings that are yet to be understood. Soon, the world will catch on. more..