Hey Cattie,
Interesting sentiments of inprisonment and betrayal, of abandonment. As always your poetry hits a mark beyond imagination making it so good, and so unique.
Good job, my dear! BZ
Sorry I've been a little preoccupied with my studies. School's finally back in session!
S
your "JUST THOUGHTS" are "JUST AMAZING" well written with a good flow, and i liked the second stanza much.. its a kind of melancholic poem, yet it was a good read..
It is easy to feel alone. I need to see my daughter and grandchildren and I feel alive and with purpose. A very sad poem. We must find reason and purpose to be alive. A excellent poem.
Coyote
I can really relate to this. I loved this so much it was just so beautiful, and heartbreaking. I agree that the last stanza really meant something. I loved the metaphor and all but it was more than that. I can't get over how much i love this poem. :D
I am lots of things, but here you'd identify most with the writer and avid reader. I have three beautiful children. The oldest boy, Seth, passed last year after fighting a long battle with cancer. .. more..