Every Time

It's the little things in life
That bring  such warmth into my heart
The things that others just call 'normal'
Things they never set apart

But I remember each 'I love you'
Every time you called me sweet
Every hug you wrapped me in
Every time that we would meet

I recall your tone of voice
The words so coated with concern
And even still I cannot fathom
How on earth your love I earned

Ever since I can remember
Life has been so dark, so cold
That every little act of kindness
Shakes my very heart and soul

Though you may think it goes unnoticed
I'd give my life just to repay
All the little things you do
Each time you chase the dark away

Author's Note

Tentative title.

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

Nicely done. It shows whats important in life.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is beautiful. We need people to assist us and make us stronger. The return gift of love and return kindness is our reward. I like the kindness and gentle emotion in your words.
Coyote

[HorrorMaster]

An outstanding poem.

[Senseless whatever]

Good write. The title is fine. The expressions of gratitude are always hard to put out there. Here you do a great job of it, mixed sadness and joy flow from the page.

[Ruth]

Those little things can be all that matters at times!
Beautifully voiced love!
Absoultely lovely!
xx

[Chantel]

I love this. I'm glad you have someone in your life like this :) These are the people who keep us alive. :)
Especially liked this stanza:

Though you may think it goes unnoticed
I'd give my life just to repay
All the little things you do
Each time you chase the dark away

Well, I guess I could have just said "the last stanza," but I wanted to read it again heehee. :)
Great write! :)

[Aggie Skeleton]

I like how you expressed the love in it, we all need a little of it now and then.

[Miss Coral]

I love this piece... the second stanza especially was wonderful. The rhyme scheme was amazing. I love the subtle rhymes, making the flow seem to fit together like puzzle pieces. However, I would consider changing "How on earth your love I earned" because it seems forced when compared to the rest.
This was wonderful overall... the emotion behind it, the love expressed... I love it. Great write.

[Norma M Sutton]

This is very nice. The sentiment in it is well expressed.

[Jenny Nelson]

Such a calming and warm and comforting feeling this gives. Beautiful piece.