Trapped

Trapped
Between unyielding walls
Cold stone blockades on either side
There is no space to breathe
No little place to try and hide

Alone
No sun to warm this chilling hole
There's only darkness all around
And heavy weights upon the heart
That try to push her underground

So Lost
All thoughts of hope begin to wane
There's no escape from the cell she's in
Life's essence starts to fade away
And she will not be seen again

Author's Note

I don't know.

Reviews

[alesuriko]

This is my favorite poem that you've written so far. I really enjoyed the structure of the poem and the flow. How the stanzas emphasis and describe the first words so well and so emotionally. It's a really nice dark, depressive piece and I loved the second stanza, especially the ending line "That try to push her underground" because it really did feel like a weight was pushing you as you read it. Well done!

[Jenny Nelson]

Wonder full description. You always do such a great job of putting a feel into words. Hang in there.

[deeps]

This is a very well written write here. So full of emotion. I like this.