This is my favorite poem that you've written so far. I really enjoyed the structure of the poem and the flow. How the stanzas emphasis and describe the first words so well and so emotionally. It's a really nice dark, depressive piece and I loved the second stanza, especially the ending line "That try to push her underground" because it really did feel like a weight was pushing you as you read it. Well done!
This is really powerful and effective. The fact that this person is trapped in the cold hole of herself makes me feel heavy hearted. These descriptions are really strong and deep.
I think this was a really good write. I thought this was very interesting. I felt like I was trapped in a world by myself and no one was there to help me. I didn't know what to expect for me. That's my opinion though. Thanks for sharing. :)
This is my favorite poem that you've written so far. I really enjoyed the structure of the poem and the flow. How the stanzas emphasis and describe the first words so well and so emotionally. It's a really nice dark, depressive piece and I loved the second stanza, especially the ending line "That try to push her underground" because it really did feel like a weight was pushing you as you read it. Well done!
If she does reappear, she would be different and much stronger. I like this, very dark and heavy, but well written for sure. Another brilliant write darlin'.
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