A Silent Prayer

Someone save me

From my dying world

From the darkness in my heart

From the fire burning through my soul

And the fears tearing me apart

 

Someone hold me

Drag me off this cliff

Away from the allure of death

Rub my hands so I can feel

Don’t let the numbness steal my breath

 

Someone heal me

Mend my fragile soul
Tell me I’m worth fighting for

Wrap me in pretty gauze and tape

Build me up from my very core

 

Someone love me

Come and be my friend

Just tell me all will be okay

Don’t let me fall, don’t let me break

Please, help me last another day

Author's Note

Yes, my poems are getting more "distraught" and losing form... I apologize. My feelings are directly tied into my writing. When feel like I'm fading, so does my work... Hopefully we can squeeze some 'good' ones in here sometime soon.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime we can get lost and feel alone. But we must find reason to keep positive. You are needed and wanted. A sad poem. Sometime words can relieve the pain. I hope you are Ok.
Coyote

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

i know this feeling i can relate. This is a great piece nice work

[Adelia Alighieri]

Very charismatic; to which many can relate.

[Undying Glory]

i think you've done an excellent job with this poem, it's that nice. anyway don't worry, you definitely aren't losing your form

[Nianque]

Some of the best writing is from suffering. Your writing style is very deep and causes me to look inside. I feel the same way sometimes but it comes across in my pictures not my words. I look forward to your writings. So keep your chin up !

[Jenny Nelson]

Stress, from a lot of little things to just a few big things can really make a mess of your psyche, especially when things don't seem very likely to chanbge. I've been where you are, and not too long ago... and I'm hoping there's not soon to be a repeat, but hang in there and keep working it out, if in no other way, with your words. I think all you've written lately have been good ones. Honest, open and well stated relating your feelings quite well.

[Crowley]

Hon....where do you think good writing comes from. Exactly where it is coming from for you. Whether you are super happy, super sad, super stressed, doesn't matter, these emotions make writing have greater vertical meaning, depth, that other writing can't reach if it wasn't written from the same place. This is another fine example of good work from you, i loved it.

[Senseless whatever]

Good write. Don't know what you think is missing here, it read well and conveyed some strong emotion.

[James Watts]

Worry about all that later. You write from your feelings, from what is inside and that shows. Edit later, but don't let it ruin what you have created.