Line In The Sand

those unreachable goals....

There’s a line drawn in the sand

Its nearly half way down the road

Its not too far and its not uphill

But never can I get close

 

I’ve yearned to reach it all my life

To finally gain your love

But every time I’m almost there

You quickly give me a shove

 

You move the line so far away

That its nearly out of sight

Then fold your arms across your chest

“Just when will you get it right?”

 

I shake my head in such despair

As I chase impossible dreams

Dreams you hate that I don’t fulfill

Yet make sure I will never reach

Author's Note

As usual, nothing special. Just thoughts.

Reviews

[Jessica Mai]

Very heartfelt and beautiful. I love the analogy for line in the sand. Not only is it unreachable but easily destroyed as well. Great write.

[Amber "Victoriomantic" ..]

Short and simple, yet oh-so-compelling. Another wonderful insight into your soul. I'm sorry that your life has not been very fair to you.

[Ashley Black]

it's beautifully writtern and very amazing

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was nice for just thoughts. I think it's really nice. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Crowley]

This is good, images about the frustration of seeing what we want but we just can't quite reach it. What happens when we do? Nice job.

[Undying Glory]

interesting and intriguing work, i liked this a lot. nice job

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

Nice Little Poem here. Love this Nice work

[♥(heatherawesome..]

this is really good and i love it and i love this poem adn you did adn awesome job keep up the work

[JENY]

Beauty of your writing lies in your ability to translate your emotions and feelings in a simple way….
Such a simplicity…that helps your message …to reach into the mind of the reader very soon …and linger there…for a long time…
Really a nice read..

[Katie Louise Hughes]

I liked it, had a great theme behind it. Thanks for sharing! :)