Conquer The World

I've conquered the world
Shoved its nose in the dirt
I've made it well known
I won't be so easily hurt

It spat at me, laughed at me
Threw sticks and stones in my face
But nothing it can do
Will put me out of this race

I'm here for good now
I've taken my stand
I don't care if there's no one
Here to hold my hand

I may get pushed down
Off this rocky mountain side
But I swear I'll get back up
There's only one thing on my mind

I've conquered the world
There's no more stopping me
No matter what they say
I will be who I want to be

Reviews

[Chris Lotus]

Wow! Im highly impressed with this piece. The wording was exceptionally wonderful and the attitude is extroidinary. I love this! It deserves a 200 rating but its over the speed limit lol

[Ruth]

To conquer our emotions is indeed to conquer the world!
This is an excellent poem
Great imagery as always love!
xx

[Tina Kline]

Written with a powerful voice and very uplifting. Good job!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

You made me feel like I could take on the world! I love how you took the victories of the past and used them as fuel for motivation. The spirit of resolve is stunning.

[deeps]

Powerful, and well written write.
I like this.

[Undying Glory]

yup, really powerful poem, and that is some truly indomitable spirit, even by Asterix's standards. epic write

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. We must attack life with passion and hope. The poem is positive and the best way to face life. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Haifa]

It is very positive poem and powerful one, like you are saying I will never give up. Well done

[aftervision]

i love the power of this write my poet -- peace is found in your care

[Miss Coral]

Great-- almost reads like a chant, aggressively and powerfully written. The second stanza seemed a little out of flow for me, but the rest of the piece was great. Nice job. :)