Hopeful Longing

Hopeful Longing

A Poem by Charity

I have so many things to tell you
So many things to explain
You will not listen
You do not want to hear me

So I keep it inside
The wound has been closed
Somehow it always
Gets opened back up again

There will be a day
When all will be forgotten
This is the day
That I long to see...

© 2011 Charity


Author's Note

Charity
This has just been on my mind for a long time.

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i love the way you bring this to a close, just as the person seeks for forgiveness you as seek to forgive. Wonderful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mmm. Good job. I'm thinking about not reviewing poetry anymore though, just because I need to reserve my time more. I like this poem though, it's excellent.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Emotional; I love it. C: You're quite the good writer!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 14, 2011
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